tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post6954363202509520586..comments2023-07-06T11:35:30.857+01:00Comments on .......................The Stone Family Legacy......................: Gen 2 - Chapter 17: The Darkest Days.strelitzia19http://www.blogger.com/profile/03223962426392096177noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-89554896700268470042010-11-15T10:03:23.749+00:002010-11-15T10:03:23.749+00:00Poor Kay! Your words conveyed her sadness so well ...Poor Kay! Your words conveyed her sadness so well :( I hope once she hold that baby, she is able to see the joy in it all but if not, perhaps adoption is in the future...or maybe some other scenario. I can't wait to find out what happens once the baby is born though. (hoping it's good lol)Camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02140579554184935424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-91984982586279550002010-11-14T16:59:02.346+00:002010-11-14T16:59:02.346+00:00I read this a while ago, just now getting around t...I read this a while ago, just now getting around to commenting. Poor Kayleigh... I feel so bad for her? I wonder why she hasn't considered adoption? I have a friend who got pregnant at 16 and decided to give her baby to a couple who really wanted to be parents.. of course, then the birth father found out and caused a big problem (he was bad news, not a guy you would want raising a baby) and so she had to keep her little girl to keep the birth dad from getting custody of her. <br />Anywho, I digress.. back to the story... my guess for who the voice is? A vampirized Alex?buckeygirl80https://www.blogger.com/profile/03316670148480793777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-67576914817379399302010-11-14T12:17:45.219+00:002010-11-14T12:17:45.219+00:00Beautiful chapter and I'm sure once the baby i...Beautiful chapter and I'm sure once the baby is born Kayleigh will wonder how she ever hated the little tyke.<br /><br />So nicely written I can't wait to see the little guy and hope she finds that sweet understanding guy that won't judge her for being a single mom.<br /><br />Loved it<br />Sky<br />http://mauisky.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-71830496802375031542010-11-14T11:32:11.743+00:002010-11-14T11:32:11.743+00:00So sad! Everything you wrote seems so real, Like w...So sad! Everything you wrote seems so real, Like we really are seeing into the mind of a heartbroken and expecting 16 year old girl. I just hope that fate has some good things to send her way.Hugzieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10574455932992082718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-23499159497821900362010-11-14T10:52:06.060+00:002010-11-14T10:52:06.060+00:00Thanks so much guys, all your comments mean a grea...Thanks so much guys, all your comments mean a great deal. <br /><br />I think you are the only one who actually still wants them to be together berry :)strelitzia19https://www.blogger.com/profile/03223962426392096177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-24413962102788418752010-11-14T01:02:58.195+00:002010-11-14T01:02:58.195+00:00Poor Kay. I really wish he would come around to hi...Poor Kay. I really wish he would come around to his senses, but I fear he won't. :(Berryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03893734576388846364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-56750797448319547182010-11-13T04:13:54.784+00:002010-11-13T04:13:54.784+00:00Wow, amazing chapter!! I feel so bad for Kayleigh,...Wow, amazing chapter!! I feel so bad for Kayleigh, but I really hope she doesn't hate the baby when he's born!Jojo777https://www.blogger.com/profile/15714010421983493470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-5363928461533547722010-11-13T00:23:30.498+00:002010-11-13T00:23:30.498+00:00A beautiful story.. I really like how you do your ...A beautiful story.. I really like how you do your story telling from characters POV. It really makes the story interesting to see how the characters are seeing their own situations.Rheassinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-50929416333634678442010-11-12T22:03:50.569+00:002010-11-12T22:03:50.569+00:00Wow Kim, that was totally amazing. :o Like I said...Wow Kim, that was totally amazing. :o Like I said, it gets BETTER and BETTER!!!! Pretty soon you're going to have like 200 followers because this legacy rocks!! :D The heartbreak you portray in this is soooo spot on. <br /><br />I can't wait till chapter 18!!!jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07871139058233751320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-56218570494982611692010-11-12T18:46:35.931+00:002010-11-12T18:46:35.931+00:00Thank-you Thea, lets hope things start to pick up ...Thank-you Thea, lets hope things start to pick up for her. :)strelitzia19https://www.blogger.com/profile/03223962426392096177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-42509096522537339582010-11-12T18:45:41.116+00:002010-11-12T18:45:41.116+00:00Ooooh Kim that is so sad. You wrote it beautifully...Ooooh Kim that is so sad. You wrote it beautifully and I am so broken hearted for Kayleigh right now! Excellent update!Theahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17023546600352241648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-47327058530539545372010-11-12T17:06:25.107+00:002010-11-12T17:06:25.107+00:00Thanks for the comments :D
I use LadyFrontBums ...Thanks for the comments :D <br /><br />I use LadyFrontBums CC mascara :)<br /><br />@ Starling, lets hope so :)strelitzia19https://www.blogger.com/profile/03223962426392096177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-36549485857271110122010-11-12T17:00:45.066+00:002010-11-12T17:00:45.066+00:00Aw poor Kayleigh :(
I really hope that things get ...Aw poor Kayleigh :(<br />I really hope that things get better for her, I bet as soon as she has her baby in her arms she won't regret a thing.<br /><br />Great chapter!starling68https://www.blogger.com/profile/14541055473200348402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-62310471510600010162010-11-12T16:30:11.864+00:002010-11-12T16:30:11.864+00:00how do u get them 2 cry with their mascara running...how do u get them 2 cry with their mascara running down their face? lol sry...<br />anyways, THAT WAS AWESOME. Plz have chapter 18 up soon. PRETTY PLZ!! and shouldn't it be generation 3? idk how/when you start another gneration, but i think it seems like it should be gen 3. idk watever. it's ur story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-32154803374415862062010-11-12T15:13:45.348+00:002010-11-12T15:13:45.348+00:00Kayleigh is so sad at what should be such a happy ...Kayleigh is so sad at what should be such a happy time. I feel her pain as I read your words. You are a great story teller.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-22993822789475790222010-11-12T12:04:10.536+00:002010-11-12T12:04:10.536+00:00Thank-you Kitty <3
I knew that bit would be pe...Thank-you Kitty <3<br /><br />I knew that bit would be perfect for Kayleigh, and had to put it in :)strelitzia19https://www.blogger.com/profile/03223962426392096177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8011848746744636985.post-68345729959585065082010-11-12T11:59:30.751+00:002010-11-12T11:59:30.751+00:00"The twins were happily playing when I heard ..."The twins were happily playing when I heard a voice that I was beginning to believe that I had only ever dreamt of. With warm tones and crisp pronunciation the overall effect was like the smell of candyfloss, an instant craving and the feeling of warmth, accompanied by an overwhelming desire to press your body against the sound, and never let it go."<br /><br />BEAUTIFUL! ;A;<br />I'm also a big fan of the song you chose for Kayleigh.. that song almost never fails to make me cry.<br /><br />beautiful, Kimmy, I wholeheartedly loved it.Kittycattylionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509758374310778518noreply@blogger.com