28 Nov 2010

Gen 2 - Chapter 20: A Night To Remember



Authors Note: Warning, this chapter contains highly explicit language and content, and the story line contains sexual imagery. Please read at own discretion.


Please make sure you read chapter 19 before proceeding.


This chapter is purely optional as all ramifications from this will be explained in the next update, however this chapter is a big part of who Kayleigh is and who she will become.



The beat flooded through me, my heels skidding slightly on the surface of the table. Chad's eyes looked up at me hungrily from the booth's seat, he smiled wolfishly as I ran my hands down my body. I could tell he wanted me, they always did. I sat back down and drank some of my cocktail, it tasted a little stronger than the last one, but most of them tried to get me drunk anyway. I felt his hand on my leg move up ever so slightly, trying to see what he could get away with. I picked an ice cube from my drink and rubbed it against my lips and moved my hand slowly down my neck. I could see the fires of passion dance in Chad's eyes, he would have taken me there if he could. I put the ice cube in my mouth and crunched. I leaned over and kissed him, I brushed my hands against the front of his trousers and felt him hard. I pushed a little harder as he let out a little moan.


A satisfied grin spread across my face, I took another sip of my drink, it tasted different, but I barely noticed. The intoxication of being wanted was clouding my senses. As I finished my drink the song changed to one of my favourites, and as I got up to dance my head started to spin. Maybe that drink was a little bit stronger than I had realised. I sat back down as I felt unsteady on my feet, Chad seemed not to notice and continued to move his hand higher. His hand went underneath my skirt, and I felt his fingers against my underwear. I leant back to enjoy the moment, as his movements became firmer. I felt a tingling and knew he should stop, I moved over to kiss him, and his hands locked on my wrists. His grip was strong and I felt suddenly uncomfortable at the intensity of his gaze. I tried to keep clarity in my thoughts, but panic started to spread. I mumbled something about going to the toilet and made to stand up. He pulled me back down and told me in his gruff voice, now edged with danger, that I wasn't going anywhere.


He undid the zip on his trousers and pushed my head down, his grip tight on my hair. I tried to break away, but the pain in my scalp was like fire. "I'm sure you know what to do, if I am not pleased I will break your pretty little face and no man will ever want to look at you again." The anger and contempt in his voice terrified me. I opened my mouth and took him inside me. He was right, this was something I knew how to do, but not here, and not like this, fear for my life made me continue. My body felt numb as I tried to block out what I was doing, his hand pushed me down further and I began to choke. I tried to please him, working my tongue and my lips around his manhood, but the tears began to fall. I gagged as he finished, but he did not let me lift my head. "Swallow" he whispered dangerously in my ear. I did as he commanded. He pushed me roughly back to my seat, I wiped my face with the back of my hand as he zipped himself back up.


My mind raced, I stood up and jumped over him and ran towards the bar. As I ran he grabbed my leg and I fell, cracking my head on the dance floor. Blood over-powered the taste of him in my mouth, and as I tried to find my feet my side exploded in pain as his right foot swung up and kicked me in the ribs. I saw two bouncers rush towards us as Chad spat on my face. As darkness crept into my vision and the beat of the music began to slow all I could thnk of was the life I had in TwinBrook with my family and friends, a life I was throwing away. I saw Alex's face which turned into Jasper's face, and then I knew nothing......

34 comments:

Kittycattylion said...

a little on the heavier side for a TS3 story, but nonetheless very well written.
Kitty's not afraid of some explicit language! ;)

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks kitty <3

Terra said...

Oh my God!! I hope Kayleigh survives! Tragically,t hat's the danger of what she's been doing, clubbing like crazy...if she does live, hopefully this will help her see how much her baby needs her...

Please, Kayleigh, be okay...!!

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Terra! <3

Cami said...

I hope she survives and this is the sharp shock she needed - though what a painful way to learn a lesson. :( It was written very well.

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Cami. I'm glad you think it's written well, I thought I might have gone a little too far :D

ay2cee said...

No way you went too far, too far would've been going into too much detail (I think)

I loved both updates Kim, and as you said, this is going to be quite the ride!

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Alex <3 Yeah I think so, what I wrote gave you enough to get an uncomfortable image in your head, without being too graphic :D

Jojo777 said...

Oh my goodness, poor Kayleigh! She really needs to get her life back together! I hope she's okay, and that maybe after this she'll pay more attention to Jasper. I feel bad for Lyra too, it's hard on her also to watch Kayleigh's behavior :(

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Jo. I understand what you mean, it must be so difficult to see your child go through something like this. :D

Thea said...

O_O That is certainly a bit of a change from the normal story line. If she wasn't the heir I'd be seriously worried for her health. I hope Alex comes and saves the day.

friendliellama said...

Oh my~ I sure hope Kayleigh survives this! And if she does, I hope she realizes that Jasper needs her~ But I guess that's what she gets, ya know?
Great chapters :)

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks guys D:

Berry said...

WOWZERS. Poor Kay :(

Abeer said...

I feel like Vomiting after reading this chapter.

strelitzia19 said...

Sorry you feel that way Abeer, but things like this happen in real life, and I try to keep my story as realistic as possible, and the warning was there. :D

taylorlegacy said...

Finally I'm caught up, and this was wonderfully written. I don't think you went too far at all; the warning was there for anyone that doesn't want to expose themselves to the content. <3 I'm anxious to see what will happen to Kayleigh. :3

~WoWLynnia

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Lynnia, I'm glad you don't think it was too far, I'm still feeling pretty weird about posting a subject as strong as this, but felt it was needed for Kay's story and personality. <3

jen said...

WOW, I'm almost at a loss for words. I agree with everyone else, it's very well written. A little disturbing, I feel so sorry for Kay for going through that. I couldn't imagine something like that. Ugh, and it happens so much in real life. Men can be so evil. :(

Very, very interesting update. Now I'll go back and read chapter 19!

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Jen, I know, that's one of the reasons I wanted to include something like that. I hope it will help my younger readers understand the dangers of doing what Kayleigh done, before they do it themselves. I know from experience just how dangerous men can be, and it's not pleasant :D

jen said...

You're welcome. I used to be young and careless like that, but glad that never happened to me. Once again, it was so accurate to what someone might do in her situation: having a baby, the guy leaves, so the girl goes somewhat crazy and tries to 'prove' she's worth being 'loved' by guys. If that makes sense; probably not, lol.

Well I'm glad you survived whatever it was you went through. I know how dangerous guys can be, but in other abusive ways (non-sexual, thankfully, but any way is bad).

Oh, and that's a great idea you're doing by writing this, making younger girls aware. :)

^_^

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks again ^_^

I think we've all been there and done something similar to this. It totally makes sense, of course any girl would want to make herself feel wanted by having guys 'want' her.

Hugzies said...

Although very strong I think this chapter is very real. I really hope that whatever was in her drink wasnt too serious and that her head injury is not life threatening.

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks Hugz :D

Duskwood Legacy said...

I liked this chapter and although it was a little dark I think its important sometimes not to forget the dangers that are out there in the real world.

Poor Kay I really hope she's ok and that the bump on the head has shaken her enough to give up her dangerous game.

Mauisky

Doons99P said...

Great job Kim! I like the way you push the boundaries - I think you should have included pics ;)

MaRtA said...

Ким, это было написано великолепно, очень реальная история, браво

strelitzia19 said...

@ Sky, thanks for commenting, every time she puts herself in that situation she is playing Russian roulette with the quality of guy. :D

@ Doons, That situation is something that a lot of people can associate with, no pictures makes the message more universal, and I wouldn't have been able to achieve the effect I wanted with the limitations the sims has. I also wanted this chapter to stand out. :D

@ MaRtA, "Kim, it was beautifully written, very real story, bravo" - Translated by google.

Thank-you, just out of interest, do you read my blog in English or Russian? If it's in Russian, I'm assuming that it is being automatically translated, if so, does it make sense?

MaRtA said...

я читаю на русском. Перевод в Google достаточно разборчив. Основная мысль ясна

strelitzia19 said...

OK, thank-you for letting me know :D

Quan-Kun said...

Wow! What a chapter! Very well written, can't wait to read the next. :D

strelitzia19 said...

Thanks guys :D

Eni/Angelpaint said...

......Oh my god.
That was...Painful.
Amazingly written but I do hate it when i heard about things like this one the news...It's the harder side of life that I love to close my eyes to.
Really good chapter, if very intense. You are an amazing writer!

Anonymous said...

What is this guy actually doing to Kayleigh? Please answer.

By the way, I love the legacy, but I have to say this wasn't what I was expecting at all! You should really start a book series. I'd read it!

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